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The tears sting more
When they refuse to fall
Hot, salty bullets of anguish.
Assaulting my eyes
As I try to forget.

I wake, like a brick wall
It's there in front of me,
Even in dreams,
I cannot escape.

Surrounded by people
I still feel lonely,
Drowning, suffocating in
The tormentor's shroud.

They don't see me,
I'm not even there.
Not really.
The happiness ended long ago.
I cannot reach the air above.
Sinking, falling, leaving.

Will I ever be visible again?
To even myself?
The cruel mirror lies,
It's image of an empty shell,
Its not me.
I'm not there.
I am broken.
Save me.
Please.
You probably already know that when I write poetry, I'm not someone who often uses a proper pattern, style and/or any actual rules of thumb for it. I just write what I feel, and this comes out (rubbish as it is, I had to et my feelings out somehow).
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floridapanther28 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't usually read poetry on DeviantART, but... this is really good. If this is a vent, then I hope you feel better and just know that I'm here for you and we all love you very much. 
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CallMeHe Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist
Thank you <3
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Strudel--Cutie4427 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013   Writer
I get ya bro...

And it's not rubbish! It's actually pretty good!
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CallMeHe Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist
Thank you :)
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TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconbwavoplz: Bunny approves.
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CallMeHe Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist
Awwwww xD
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TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Keep up the good work.
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xxXBloodroseXx Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
sadly this describes me... not even my friends see it but its true...
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Whazizname Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013   General Artist
:)
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